Wednesday, 27 July 2016

Joseph's Epic Day

My Epic Day      
“My computer is here, yippee”.  Also, it has my favourite colours; white and light blue with beaming light is on it.

It’s epic, so the second thing I did was zoom upstairs because I was curious. I opened my brand new computer and tap, tappity tap. “Mum can you believe I have my own Chromebook?”
 “Yes” she replied. But it’s time for bed,” my mum said. I said, “Ok.”
10 Minutes later.  zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

By Joseph

1 comment:

  1. Hi Joseph
    we liked your describing words and your punctuation. It was a very interesting story and did you actually fall asleep?
    and also did you get it from JB-HIFI
    from Max and Noah.